AI 与写作2016npr.org编辑精选
人还是机器:你能分辨这些诗是谁写的吗?
Human or Machine: Can You Tell Who Wrote These Poems?
导读
这篇 NPR 互动测试让读者分辨哪些诗是人写的、哪些是机器写的,评论者则总结出机器诗的单句可以很像样,但整体往往缺少主题推进。值得写作者读,因为它提醒我们:写作的难点不在句子漂亮,而在焦点、连贯和情感共鸣。
可以直接用的写作要点
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好诗或好文章需要一个贯穿始终的主题,每一行都应为前面的内容增加新的意义。
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机器容易模仿格律、押韵和句子表面,但真正打动人的情感共鸣和整体意图更难伪造。
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判断文本不能只看单句是否精彩,还要看整篇是否围绕一个想法持续推进。
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看到机器生成的好文本时,要注意它是否经过人工筛选;评估写作能力应看未筛选的原始输出。
HN 评论精选
人写的诗有贯穿主题和逐行推进,机器诗单句像样但整体不成立。
我答对了 6/6,而且大多数诗我都没读到一半。破绽是什么?是焦点。人写的诗每一行都围绕一个单一、连贯的主题展开,每一行都为前面的行增添新的光亮。机器写的十四行诗,任何单行单独看都像人写的,但合在一起就不成立;单一思想的推进根本不存在。我特别讨厌诗歌,但我说这些是想说明,机器诗糟糕的方式反而让我更欣赏人的诗。
beloch查看英文原文
6/6, and I didn't read more than half-way through most of these. What's the tell? Focus. The human-written poetry develops a single, coherent subject with each passing line. Each new line adds new light to the ones that preceded it. Any single line of the machine written sonnets, considered alone, might appear to be written by a human but, when taken together, they simply don't add up. The progression of a single idea just isn't there. I freakin' hate poetry. Give me prose or give me epigrams! To me, a poem is an awkward combination of prose without clarity and and epigram too bloated to be stated succinctly. I point this out, because I want to be taken seriously when I say that this machine-written poetry is bad in a way that makes me appreciate human poetry just a little bit more.
格律和押韵可以机械化,情感共鸣难得多。
只要节奏和押韵正确,机器写诗应该相当容易——只需找节奏模式和押韵的词。能在情感层面打动人则难得多。
blowski查看英文原文
Poetry that scans correctly should be fairly easy to write for a machine - just find words with the right rhythm patterns and rhymes. Poetry that connects on an emotional level must be a lot harder.
精选过的机器诗会显得更连贯,测试应看未筛选输出。
正如其他人所说,缺少整体主题是区分人和机器诗歌的简单方法。记住,这些机器诗是人手挑选、双重过滤后的——这次发表和最初发表都筛过。这意味着它们具有你在别处看不到的高度连贯性。人们报告能 6/6 区分。如果让一个人和一个算法各自未经筛选地生成两首(甚至一首)诗,哪首是机器哪首是人会更明显。
daveguy查看英文原文
As others have mentioned, lack of an overall theme is an easy way to distinguish the human from machine poetry. Keep in mind, the machine poems are those hand selected by humans, twice filtered -- this publication and the original publication. That means these poems have a high degree of coherency that you wouldn't otherwise see. People are reporting 6/6 ability to distinguish. If you had a person and an algorithm each generate two (or even one) poem without any filtration from a field of poems then it would be even more obvious which was machine and which was human.
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