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如何写出一本畅销小说(2000)
How to Create a Bestselling Novel (2000)
导读
这是物理学家 Clifford Pickover 在 2000 年写的一份"畅销小说配方"清单:短句、利落对话、让主角早早陷入爱情、把故事放在异域或新奇场景里等等。值得写作者读,是因为它把可操作的技术要点列得很清楚;但评论区提醒我们,这只是一份"入门级"清单,真正的畅销小说还需要出版、营销、编辑与读者口碑的共同推动。
可以直接用的写作要点
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把短句和利落的对话当作默认设置:先练好这项基本功,再考虑何时故意打破它。
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尽早让读者关心人物关系——比如让主角在前几章就陷入爱情或重大冲突,故事才有牵引力。
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给故事一个新鲜的场景(异域、特殊行业、极端环境),让读者觉得"没读过这样的东西"。
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把这类清单当启发式而非铁律:真正好的规则往往是被它的例外定义的,遇到需要时敢于违规。
HN 评论精选
清单只是入门技巧,畅销小说依赖整个出版与销售链条上许多人的合力。
这份清单漏掉了当职业小说家的全部商业面:出版商在做什么、零售链条怎么运转、营销与销售、合同、经纪人和编辑。它也漏掉了关键一点:作者虽是核心创意推动者,但一份稿件不等于一本书——从喜欢它并多订几本、向顾客推荐的巴诺书店店员,到相信它、把损益表推到极限并在营销会上拼命推销的编辑,再到封面设计和腰封文案(别以为在亚马逊时代这些不重要),需要很多人才能做出"畅销小说"。Pickover 的建议都不坏,但基本是编程入门课级别的"用 Python 打印 hello, world"——恭喜你成为程序员了,接下来请用汇编给嵌入式控制器写中断处理程序吧。
cstross查看英文原文
Hmm. Misses out all of the business side of being, like, a working novelist -- understanding what publishers do and how the retail chain works, marketing and sales, contracts, agents and editors. Misses out the key point that while the author is the prime creative mover, a manuscript is not a book and it takes a lot of people to make a "bestselling novel", from the clerks in B&N who like it and order in extra copies and tell customers about it, to the editor who believes in it enough to push the P&L sheet as far as it will go and who then goes up in front of a marketing meeting and pitches it hard. And the cover design and the flap copywriter (and if you think that stuff doesn't matter in the age of Amazon you've got a rude awakening due). None of Pickover's advice is bad, but it's very much Programming 101, here's how we write "hello, world" in Python. (Congratulations! You're a programmer now! So for an encore, you can write an interrupt handler for an embedded controller in assembler ...)
规则是启发式而非铁律,懂得何时破例才是成熟写作者的标志。
这些都是很好的启发式规则,但写了很久之后我发现,偶尔确实有理由违反它们。不过也许每条伟大的规则都是由它的例外来定义的。另外很高兴看到文章聚焦语言的技术层面,而不是那套增长黑客式的营销话术。
FlailFast查看英文原文
These are great heuristics, but having spent an awful lot of time writing, I find that---on occasion---there's reason to violate them. But I suppose every great rule is defined by its exceptions. As an aside, glad to see this focus on the technical aspects of language and not some growth-hackery marketing spiel.
配方能写出合格的小说,却带不动销量;注意力市场是赢家通吃,需要众人助推。
如果这真是"速成畅销小说"的秘方,那 Paul Bussard 的《Stinger Stars》早该成为国际畅销书了——它把每一条都精确命中(男女主角坠入爱河、国家地理式的场景、短句、利落的对话等等)。但事实是,写出来只是开始,后面的路难得多。世界的注意力很短,人们想看别人正在看的东西。书、音乐、电影、网站都是赢家通吃的世界,一本书很难独自带动人群,需要很多人来帮它。
ChuckFrank查看英文原文
If this was the secret recipe to making an Instant Bestselling Novel, then Paul Bussard's Stinger Stars http://www.goodreads.com/book/show/19246309-stinger-stars would be an international hit. It hits every single one of his points exactly (C1&C2 falling in love / Nat Geo setting / Short sentences, Crisp Dialogue, etc.) But the fact is that it's actually much harder than just writing it. The attention span of the world is short, and people are looking to read what other people are reading. It's a winner take all world, in books, music, movies and websites. It's hard for a single book to move the herd. Many people have to help. (full disclosure - I PMd the title)
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