小说与文学2019newyorker.com编辑精选
可以一群人合写一部小说吗?
Can You Write a Novel as a Group?
导读
这篇《纽约客》文章讨论多人合写一部小说是否可行,以及这种做法在历史上的实例与现实的困难。对写作者来说,它既是关于协作叙事的案例集,也提醒我们:集体创作真正难的不是写出句子,而是统一风格、管理连续性、协调节奏。
可以直接用的写作要点
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多人合写前先建一份“设定圣经”:风格手册、人物资料、情节地图,否则故事会四处留下没有交代的情节线索。
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每个段落收尾都留一个小悬念,像连环画最后一格那样,主动把接力棒递到下一位作者手里,保证故事不断。
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按各人特长分工接力:擅长动作场面的写动作,擅长感情戏的写感情,擅长政治阴谋的写阴谋,让合写发挥各自长处。
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合写初稿必然松散;最后用统一的风格过滤和连续性编辑过一遍,才能把接龙变成真正可读的作品。
HN 评论精选
合写需要与作者数量匹配的编辑投入和设定文档,并用“结尾悬念”维持接力动力。
我曾在论坛上参与写过几篇中篇小说长度的接龙故事。如果把整个帖子按统一风格过滤一遍,再在连贯性上编辑一遍,其中一两篇还勉强能读。我的猜测是:需要的编辑人数与作者人数的平方根成正比;一旦作者超过两人,就必须有风格手册、人物参考指南和故事地图,否则就会写成互不相关的一团乱麻,到处都是没有下文的情节线索。为了不让帖子凉掉,你得写得像连环画那样,在最后一格留个小悬念勾人翻页,只不过你是在催促下一个人接过去再写几段。写久了你会摸清哪位常客该接下一棒:好久没有交代性对话了,大家就等下一位来写;有人爱写刺激的动作戏,有人爱加感情支线,有人塞政治阴谋,有人硬塞剧情反转,还有人专门在每帖里把角色写死、把场景烧光,而另一位则总在其后解释某角色夜夜做的噩梦。最大的乐趣在于:你能看着故事自己展开,而不用承担让它展开的全部劳动。
logfromblammo查看英文原文
I have written portions of a few novella-length chain stories on bulletin boards. If you ran the whole board topic through a style filter and then edited it for consistency and continuity, one or two might even be somewhat readable. My guess is that you need a number of editors proportional to the square root of the number of authors, and anything greater than two authors requires a style manual, character reference guides, and a story map. Otherwise it's kind of a disconnected mess, with dangling plot hooks everywhere. In order to not kill the topic, you have to write it sort of like comic pages, where there's a miniature cliffhanger in the last panel, to get you to turn the page. Except you're goading the next person to pick up the story and carry it for a few more paragraphs. If it goes on for long, you get a sense for which of the regular posters should be next. It's been a while since we had some expository dialogue, so everybody waits for X to post. Y likes to write thrilling action scenes. Z drops in romantic subplots. W inserts political intrigues. U throws in gratuitous plot twists. T is the troll that tries to kill all the characters and burn all the scene settings in every post. S explains, after every T post, about the recurring nightmares that one of the characters has every night. Mainly, the fun is that you get to see the story unfold without doing all the work to make it unfold.
线上角色扮演就是一种成熟的多人协作叙事实践,还催生了辅助工具。
很多线上角色扮演本质上就是如此:两个或更多人合作讲一个故事。(说明:我在线角色扮演已超过十五年。)我目前正在做一个工具来辅助这个过程,可以编辑、管理、重排单条帖子和段落,并把它们按时间线在空间上排列。等它足够完善,我会发到 HN 上。
phoe-krk查看英文原文
A lot of online roleplaying is exactly that: two or more people cooperatively telling a story. (Disclosure: been roleplaying online for over 15 years.) I am actually in the process of writing a tool that facilitates that process and allows one to edit, manage, reorder individual posts and paragraphs, and spatially order them on a timeline. I'll throw it at HN when it's ready enough.
集体戏仿之作也可能意外畅销,说明合写能够形成商业上可行的作品。
更早的合写小说《Naked Came the Stranger》出版于六十年代末,是一群报社记者为了嘲讽当时的小说而当作玩笑写出来的,结果成了畅销书。出版几年后,正值我青春期萌芽,我在父母的书房里发现了它并一口气读完,尽管很多内容我并不理解。我母亲在我房间里发现它时有点惊恐。
Wistar查看英文原文
An earlier group-penned novel "Naked Came the Stranger" was published in the late 60s. It was written by a bunch of newspaper journalists as a joke poking fun at other novels of that era. It became a bestseller. Some years after it was published—when I was in my budding adolescence—I discovered it in my parents' library and devoured it although I didn't understand everything in the story. My mother was a bit aghast when she found it in my room.
写作没有硬性规则,但读者是否接受是另一重考验。
写作上你什么都能做,没有规则。至于世界喜不喜欢这个结果,那就是另一回事了。
jhunter1016查看英文原文
You can do anything with writing. There are no rules. Whether the world likes the outcome is a different story altogether.
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